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C2: Colorful--Melody by MikiClover C2: Colorful--Melody by MikiClover
commission for =Colorful--Melody
her OC Pastel-chan is here!!

excuse me about the largeness of the pic... did it so you can see the little message on the cake lol
idk, i thought someone, like my sister, would be interested.
and this will be one of the few chance you can see my pic so zoomed in >///<

i also tried using new techniques and tools... how do you think??
hope u love it!! ;w;


[Materials]
Copic Marker
Copic Opaque White
Foray Fine Tip Pen
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:iconcolorful--melody:
okie dokie another critique time >Uso yeah lets get to the point quickly~
vision very cute as usual. i like how you made lineless for the curtain? and the rose bushes. and the lined part pops out well. the color choice of yours make this drawing even more pretty <3
originality since the character is mine this drawing can't be fully original ;A: im sowy. but, i really loved how you added your original touch and style but yet she is recognizable ^^ and thanks for that lovely pet kitty <3 <3 that was a surprize for me. and i really like your design of the tea set >Utechnique i can see you used the copic opaque white for this one ^^ even its your first timie using it, i can see confidence on using the material. its like "heh i know how this works. it goes here and there!" the roses are nearly perfect and the shine in the eyes add shoujo-ness. i like the little shine on the cakes and chair too ^^ yes i see everything lol.
impact you never fail to surprize me gurl. especially this time, you made me squeee for real lol. and this artwork looks colorful~ which makes me really happy ;v;/ im sure all your watchers who looked at this art will love it~

something that bothered me in this drawing its been a long time since i criticized u ne. i also told u in real too but the neck is just sooooo skinny. im just so scared that her head might fall antime >< also the placement of eyebrow bothered me too. im sure you can see it too. puretty obvious also the cake on the very left. it looks like it is either slanted toward us or falling lol.

okie lets end this loooong critique ;v; i will keep this drawing as my treasure~ this is one of the best drawing i have received so far <3 <3
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The piece uses a very easy-on-the-eyes color palette and has very crisp, gentle lines. The shading is quite lovely and shows the difference in material, especially from the tablecloth versus the grass, which is a great feat! Though the image is a bit common in idea, it is shown in a very well-articulated manner that makes it hard not to like.

I think if anything, my only real complaint would be the fact that, to me, the ribbons on the curtains blend a little too well in with the sky. Though it's a minor detail, I find it keeps drawing me back to them to try to figure out where the ribbon ends and a cloud begins. Besides that one issue, which is quite minor anyway, the piece is quite intricate, detailed and cute. It makes me feel warm and happy, and it makes me hungry from all the yummy snacks too. Well done!
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:iconnegalisticblast:
NegalisticBLAST Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so lovely, it's been a while since I lat saw a drawing of yours, so lovely it makes me smile. I love the no line concept, it remibds me of watercolors whenever I see it done, so pretty and eye catching. The sweet message was a "awwwwwwwww"
defining moment!
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much ;v;
glad to hear!
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NegalisticBLAST Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your welcome!
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:icondeepseastar:
deepseastar Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist
Beautiful as always Miki! >.<
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ohhhh thanx ;v;/
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:iconlyona-dono:
Lyona-dono Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The coloring looks so smooth. *^* And it's so sweet~ The character looks adorable. First Kaoani
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you very much!! ;A;

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:iconlyona-dono:
Lyona-dono Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. ^^
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REBORNxYUI Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I absolutely love this~! It is a very pretty piece of art. The curtains are so well done and the roses add so much to it. The blends with colours is really good and how do you make you lines so clean!!! Even from close up, its so fine!
I guess your just awesome that way...

Opaque white is awesome, they are great with watercolor too!!
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
amguuuuu ;v;
thank you so much!! 
so glad to hear!!

you use opaque white too?! ;o;
yes its awesome!!
never met any other white out like that!!
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:iconrebornxyui:
REBORNxYUI Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
You can thin it with some water for transparent feel as well (like drawing sheer curtains, lace etc).
It is very usefull!!!
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh really!! 
i have been always thinking white out is for erasing mistake but hmm transparency...
thanks for da tip ;u;
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REBORNxYUI Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
>w< ur welcome
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SunflowerMusic Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
おおお~!!
かわいい~w BGはアウトラインしてないんだね,だからなのか分かんないけど立体的に見える気がする!w

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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ありがとうございますです!!
w望月さんのアートブック見てたら何故かこうなった
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SunflowerMusic Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
いえいえww
そうなんだwインスピレーション?w
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
かもねーw
望さんサイキョー
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marikadaa Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so freaking cute and awesome ^^!
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks!!! ;u;
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:iconkapaww:
kapaww Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
asdfdgsfa, look simple, but the color.... beautifully matching <3

aahhhh, really love the soft color that you use >.<
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much!! ;o;
im so glad to hear~~
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:iconfallenangelkokoro:
FallenAngelKokoro Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awww <333
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks for the aww! >u<
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:iconfallenangelkokoro:
FallenAngelKokoro Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
np np >w<
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Grotesque-89 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
Very cute!:iconhontoplz:
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks!! <3
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Grotesque-89 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
You are welcome!:iconsmilingcronaplz:
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:iconmiathekitty:
MiaTheKitty Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is really good!! It's so cute!
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
im so glad to hear!! ;w;
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AKreiko Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Love the colors!!!
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
glad to hear ;w;
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galaxy-tan Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
ahhh this is so pretty and cute ;//A//;!!!
the colors kgjslgjs i just love this!!! ♥
keep up the great work * Q *!!
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you !! ;w;
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galaxy-tan Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
no problem at all! ♥
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:iconagetian:
Agetian Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
Very beautiful!! :heart:
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
im ao glad to hear *´∀‘*
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:icondiskfire:
diskfire Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
Aww, nice!
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks!! ^^
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:iconbrokenwingsoflight:
BrokenWingsOfLight Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
SO CUTE!!!
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks!! OwO
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:iconbrokenwingsoflight:
BrokenWingsOfLight Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Welcome!
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:icon50-for-nothing-cent:
50-for-nothing-cent Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Student General Artist
that is so AMAZING! xD
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you >u<
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:icon50-for-nothing-cent:
50-for-nothing-cent Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Student General Artist
you're welcomeee! ^^
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3v1l73ddy Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Student General Artist
You know what this reminds me of? Puella Magi Madoka Magica, when they go into the Witch's thing. And Alice in Wonderland, having tea : p. It's beautiful! XD
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MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ohhh if you mention it ;v; lol
thank you<3
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3v1l73ddy Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Student General Artist
XD
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DancingSubaru Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This looks so sweet!!!
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks!! >u<
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