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Hiding the Pain by MikiClover Hiding the Pain by MikiClover
Once its teared apart, it can not be fixed completely.

my oc Rise Akatsuki
second time drawing in dark theme.
dont worry, i will come back to cute, sweet things after this
it my second time drawing him too.

hope u like the bloody-ness

<Material>
Copic R20, Black100
Sharpie and Random Pens
Edited on FireAlpaca
<Copyright>
Character, Drawing (c) Me
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:iconemii-angel:
Critique by emii-angel Jul 13, 2012, 4:37:30 PM
Oh my god, this is awesome. ^^ The colors are beautiful together :)

Not on your oc but the other black, red, and white parts, maybe you could make it a little bit darker like a light grey, something like that. Your oc's expression doesn't exactly fit with the title, still wonderful [as always]. You could have also probably made it a little more bloody, you know if blood doesn't bother you. It was a little hard to make out what it said on the left, I actually thought it was on of the black, red, and white bloobs.


I hope this helped :D


Sorry if I did something wrong this is my first critique...

^^
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This is a really beautiful work, don't be afraid to dive into something different because your afraid of losing your fans or being deemed weird or anything. As an artist it's better and opens the box you have been stuck in.

if you do different things so I emplore you to do different things like this. It helps you to step out and do many different things besides the comfort zone you been in so I suggest works like this, not just dark but, realism, still life, Architecture, backgrounds, soft themes, dark themes, mature, all of the many possibilities! don't be just stuck in one place because it hinders you as an artist and only has one way.:boing:

This is such a stunning piece, I was like this is making such a angst and deep statement that works.

I really like the stitching in the background, it's actually very good, like it's falling and ripping apart at the seems.

Hmm, I'm not sure but adding something different to the background instead of it being so empty could have pulled of a much more deeper, effect. Maybe shadow buildings in the background or some creepy faces or shadowy figures in the background, shadowy skeletons, emitting from a shadow from some place to make it feel more dark. It's like your there! but not quite there yet in regards to the picture. :boing:

I love the way you inked there hair, Very beautiful. I always liked that about your works, is how you inked hair and added highlights. I also like how you did the eyes of the character that is also very nice indeed. the stitching crossing the mouth is also very nicely drawn.

I think that the neck is quite to small and thin. A tip on how to remember on how to not make it to to small is if you think of it like if can turn the neck to a 160o angle if it would snap or not, if it does! it's to thin and if it doesn't it's a good size. :boing:

I really love everything else about this picture, the way you did the upper body is pretty good! and I adore the detailing you put on the pants, like wow very beautifully detailed. It's like you looked at the wrinkles that pants actually made. I like that~!

I also think that the lining of his pants is going over to far to the left and misplaces his crotch area. I also would like to add that you did so well with the upper part of his body but kind of let the bottom get a bit neglicted in some type of detail like cross hatching the crinkles and not making the legs look really flat like that without any dimention of the leg. but other then that, well done! Keep up the good work!!~!:boing:

Here are some references on anatomy that could help benefit you in correcting and making less of these mistakes. If you can implement the human anatomy of male and female humans, this will greatly improve your artwork. I look foward to more of your works in the future!! Keep on striving MikiClover~!

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CAT-Keats Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student Artist
It's kinda creepy, but it's cool! :D
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MikiClover Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you~~ >u<
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Kanra-san12 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice I love it!
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MikiClover Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you!!
glad to hear that!
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emii-angel Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012
I probably already commented on this but,



I can't get over how awesome this is, it's almost like a song stuck in my head! This is like, overly awesome :D
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MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much!
lol so glad!!
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emii-angel Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012
^^ No problem
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AKreiko Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Student General Artist
That is amazing. :iconcryingplz:
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you~!!:iconasdfghplz:
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rerikusu Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Student General Artist
omg.
love...love...i love dark stuff like this.
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
glad to hear that! :3
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rerikusu Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Student General Artist
>w<
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NegalisticBLAST Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love the BLOOOOOOOD very good and dark! I love your jeans I can't get jeans right for some reason.
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MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much!!

just look at the real jeans and examine it. check where the wrinkles usually appear or where stitches are.
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NegalisticBLAST Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your very welcome!
I'll be sure to take and use the advice. Thanks!
And one more thing while were at it. You use sharpie for ur outlines right? Is it a specific tip or something? I tried doing it for oldtime sake, but the lines were fat and just ugly *sob* It didn't look anything like yours! lol.
Just wondering.
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MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
glad to be a good help!! :3

i use sharpie, its what its called "fine tip".
if its fine tip, im actually fine with any marker or pens.
my recent two pictures are done in Foray Fine Tip Pen.
sharpie's fine tip was good but often ink got dry too soon.
Foray's got more ink.
so yea, just get whats called "fine tip" if you want to get thinner and not really ugly lines.
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NegalisticBLAST Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I see, I'll be sure to do that, also trying out the foray brand. thank you again!
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MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no problem!
glad to be help!
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Saiya-STORY Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This is beautiful! I love the clothes and everything else!! AHHH! :heart: So awesome!!
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MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much!!:iconkissingplz:
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SunflowerMusic Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012
おおおおおおおおおお~!
かっこいい~!!
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
うおおおおおおお!!
ありがとう!!
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SunflowerMusic Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
どういたしまして(^^)
can you spare some points ってどういう意味?(一人の人にそれを聞かれてどう答えればいいかわからなくて)
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MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
pointsちょうだいって意味。
無視しとけばいいよ。それか、どうしてもReplyしたかったら、
sorry i do not have any point. i can only give llama.
とでも言っとけ。自分のホームページにコメントして来たらSpamにマークしたらいいよ。
~(・ヮ・)~
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SunflowerMusic Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012
おk、ありがとう:hug:
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MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
どういたしまして。
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SunflowerMusic Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012
:D
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Merupuri-chan Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
so cool.
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks :3
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Merupuri-chan Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
np <3
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Midnightamulet Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool
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MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks!! >A<
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Midnightamulet Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem!
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KawaiiSock Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
woah looks cool~
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you!! >u<
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KawaiiSock Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thatstyleiscooltoo
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MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks >u<
glad to hear that from Socky!
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KawaiiSock Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeah i really like the style of this and the 'lets be friends' [link] pic i think you should experiment more with that style, i really like it~ =)
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MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you!
but my mom prefers happy kind :3 she made really weird face when she saw this pic "Hiding the Pain" lol
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KawaiiSock Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i dont mean that it shouldnt be happy i just liked how you made it less of a chibi type style. now dont get me wrong i lurve ur chibi's but i think you should try a little more of the realistic..style (if thats wut u wanna call it.)
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MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i see

i dont mean to draw lot of chibi...
it just when it come to waist up or bust up drawing,
somehow it turns out like chibi orz

i think i have to work on on anatomy more -n-
thank you :3
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AlistairVanAllen Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Looks great
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MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks!!
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AlistairVanAllen Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Welcome :)
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hola365 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
Yay! It's bloody and adorable! *-*
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:iconmikiclover:
MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much!!
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Rubeah Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really amazing~~~
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MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you!!
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shinatarou Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really love how you do the hair! It's so amazing ;u;
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MikiClover Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh really!! thank you so much!!
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