Pink Devil

Okay you said you wanted a critique so im going to do my best to give you one since i really do love your work!
Okay first i want to start by saying that in every picture that i see you draw i love, love, LOVE the hair. Actually in my spare time i find myself trying to duplicate it! Ha ha, but it is a very interesting way of showing your talents ^^
Secondly your anatomy is fantastic as well as your coloring. But you mentioned that there was something that didn't feel right. I think that the only thing that really distracts from this picture is where you put a lot of black over some pink. Now it doesn't look "bad" it just looks a little chalky and out of place. Maybe you did the back with the sharpie? If you did i wouldn't suggest doing that again. Sharpies are too thin and they are not as dark as a lot of the other things you can use so they kind of suck the color out of things. Maybe you could use a more solid black to do more darker spaces next time ^^
<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/u/g/u…" alt="" title="Uguufaceplz"/> but you did a great job i love your work!